Love Haiku 16:18
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so distant my love
vast are the ocean waters
ours the velvet skies
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your resonant voice
sound of a longing cello
sparrow’s evening song
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pathway in moonlight
leads to our familiar hills
trees dance in the night
D. G. Vachal © 2024
Image by Addesia @pixabay
lilies, sparrows and grass 
Exquisite expression 🎶… like a dance, a song…
Thank you most kindly, Susan! I am thrilled you caught the “dance” and the “song” in these words!
Oh, this is just plain gorgeous… the comparisons (can’t remember if they are metaphors or similes) are so rich and deep. Some, yes, as said above, exquisite language but then I always love your work! This is one of my favorites. I am going to check if you have a book out on Amazon.
Oh thank you so very much for your uplifting words, Ellen! I don’t have a book out on Amazon yet. It’s such a compliment that you will check if I do! I will definitely be working on it! I love your work too!
Thank you, dear D.G. So I saw you have no books yet. Please let me know if you do. I would definitely purchase it.❤️🙏🏽
You are so sweet dear Ellen. Yes, I will definitely let you know once I publish one!
Thank you, dear V.G.
Very beautiful!
Thank you so much, Dawn! All the best to you!